BOTHERATION: PART 5: VITNR CHAPTER ONE
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- Nov 4, 2025
- 9 min read
Updated: Feb 3

I didn’t like the way Chloe said my name.
Not because it was loud—Chloe was always loud—but because she said it as she owned it. Like my name was a handle she could grab whenever she wanted to drag me somewhere.
“Matty!”
My shoulders tightened before my brain could decide if I was even in trouble. That was the last three years in one reflex. My biological dad happened, Chloe happened, and suddenly every hallway, every room, every conversation came with an invisible scoreboard I was already losing.
Gabriel turned first. Of course he did. Six feet of him made turning look like a casual choice instead of a survival response. I turned second, and Chloe was already coming at us down the trail, phone in hand, eyes bright with that specific kind of energy that meant:
I found something, and I’m going to make it your problem.
She stopped in front of us like she’d blocked the whole path on purpose.
“I need you,” she said, breathless. “Now.”
Gabriel raised his eyebrows. “What is it?”
Chloe flicked her phone upward, as if the device made her more credible. “There’s a boulder down by the wash, and it has Sean and Douglas’s names on it.”
The names snagged in my head.
Sean and Douglas were locally famous. The kind of kids you heard about, even if you weren’t friends with them. Always around. Always together. Always making noise. And then at some point, the story went quiet, the way adults made certain stories quiet.
“Sean and Douglas?” I said.
Chloe’s eyes narrowed like she’d caught me questioning her. “Yes. Sean and Douglas. And before you go full Methuselah on me—there’s a skull in it. With teeth.”
“A skull,” Gabriel repeated, and I couldn’t tell if he believed her or was just giving her room to be dramatic.
Chloe heard doubt anyway. She always did.
“It’s basically a dinosaur skull,” she said, like she was issuing a ruling. “Don’t start.”
I opened my mouth to ask the obvious questions—how big, where, did you touch it—but Chloe’s look said I’d already spent my question allotment. Gabriel didn’t argue. He just started walking.
Chloe pivoted and led the way as if this were her show, and we were late to the scene.
Gabriel’s long stride ate the trail. I had to quicken into a half-jog to keep up, backpack strap biting my shoulder. Chloe walked ahead, talking too fast, the way she did when she didn’t want her thoughts to catch up with her.
“It’s huge,” she said. “Like bigger than a car. And it’s right there where you can see it. Like it’s waiting.”
My mouth went dry at the word waiting.
“Did you touch it?” I asked.
Chloe glanced back like I was insulting her intelligence. “No. I’m not dying for content.”
“Good,” Gabriel said.
The wash opened up around a bend, and the moment I saw the boulder, I understood why Chloe had sounded different.
It wasn’t a boulder. It was a vehicle-sized slab, bigger than a full-size car, half-buried in the wash like the earth had tried to swallow a stone truck and given up. Rain had carved dirt away from its base, exposing a broad, flat face of rock—smooth enough to write on, tall enough to feel like a wall.
And across that face, in thick black marker, loud as a billboard:
SEAN WAS HERE
DOUGLAS TOO
HOWEVER… SEAN FIRST
BUT BROTHERS FOREVER
Teen handwriting. Big strokes. A stupid little power move frozen in ink.
Chloe pointed as if she was accusing the planet, “That.”
I barely heard her; beside the writing, the rock had a second message.
A dark hollow in the stone—long and sideways—barely hid an eye that wasn’t meant to blink. Below it, a ridge protruded that wasn’t random. And under that ridge, pale shapes protruded from a lighter matrix.
Teeth.
Not jagged mineral spikes. Not cracked quartz.
Teeth with sockets.
My throat tightened.
“Oh my God,” I said, because sometimes that’s all your brain can produce when it realizes reality just grew teeth.
Gabriel crouched immediately, hovering his hands near the fossil but not touching. Even crouched, he was still taller than me by a ridiculous margin—his shoulders blocking part of the view like a human barricade.
Chloe leaned to see around him and made an annoyed sound. “Move. You’re blocking my view.”
“Good,” Gabriel said without looking back. “You don’t need a close-up.”
Chloe huffed. “I found it.”
That was Chloe’s favorite spell: I found it. It turned everything into territory.
I stepped closer, and the height difference hit me in a way it usually didn’t. The fossil sat higher than my eye line. Gabriel could study it from a comfortable crouch. I had to plant one sneaker on a low ledge and brace a hand against the boulder—careful not to touch bone, careful not to smear marker—to get my face near enough to read the details.
“Not climbing,” I muttered, because I could feel Chloe’s smirk even without looking at her. “Adjusting.”
Chloe snorted. “Sure, Methuselah.”
From this close, the anatomy snapped into focus, and my brain did what it always did when I was scared: it tried to inventory facts.
The “eye” wasn’t a round socket like a movie dinosaur. It was elongated—more like a sideways oval. The snout area tapered forward, long and sleek. The jawline ran long, not short and chunky.
And the teeth weren’t knife blades. They were smooth cones, thick and slightly curved, spaced with ugly purpose. Some were still seated. Some were missing, leaving empty circular pits like punched-out holes.
Grabbing teeth.
Built to seize slippery prey.
I exhaled slowly. “Chloe… this isn’t a dinosaur.”
Chloe’s head snapped toward me so fast it felt like a slap. “Oh my God. Here we go.” She jabbed her finger at the rock face without touching it. “Don’t do that, Methuselah. It has teeth. It’s a skull. Normal people can see it.”
Gabriel straightened a little, like he was trying to keep the peace. “She’s not dumb for calling it a dinosaur,” he said. “Normal people do.”
Chloe latched onto it instantly. “Thank you.”
I shot Gabriel a look. Not angry. Warning. Don’t undermine me when the thing in front of us is already undermining me.
“I’m not calling her dumb,” I said. “I’m saying it’s not a theropod. This is marine matrix.” I nodded at the pale sandy stone around the bone. “Long jaw. Conical teeth. No serrations. This looks like a mosasaur.”
Chloe blinked. “A what.”
“A marine reptile,” I said. “Late Cretaceous. Big ocean predator.”
The word ocean made something cold drag along the inside of my ribs, like a memory I didn’t want.
Gabriel stood fully now, scanning the wash and the trail like he expected the boulder to have friends. Six feet of him turned the space into his perimeter. It should’ve made me feel safer.
Instead, it made me feel smaller.
Chloe folded her arms, posture screaming I refuse to be scared in front of you. “So basically an underwater dinosaur.”
“Not a dinosaur,” I said automatically.
Gabriel shrugged, a tiny concession. “In normal-person language, she’s close enough.”
I wanted to argue, but my eyes had already caught something above the graffiti—something that wasn’t marker.
Faint, worn industrial stencil. The kind of label you put on material you expect to move.
JP-17 / LOT 4B
My stomach dropped.
Gabriel saw my face change. “What.”
I pointed. “That’s a quarry tag.”
Chloe squinted. “So?”
“So this rock didn’t just end up here,” I said. “Somebody moved it.”
Gabriel’s gaze dropped to the wash floor. “Yeah.”
Parallel grooves pressed into the dirt. Deep enough to survive rain. Too straight to be random.
“Tire tracks,” I said quietly. “Something heavy came in here.”
Chloe stared at the boulder again—at the sheer, impossible mass of it—and the fear finally shoved past her attitude. “Okay,” she whispered, “so who dragged a car-sized rock into Jeffries Ranch.”
She didn’t say, “and why,” but I heard it.
I was still braced on the ledge when my phone ticked in my pocket.
Not a notification sound.
A soft haptic pulse, like the device had woken up on its own.
My blood went colder.
Gabriel noticed instantly. “Matty.”
“I didn’t do anything,” I said, which was not an answer to what he meant.
Chloe’s eyes narrowed. “What did your phone do.”
“Nothing,” I said too fast.
Gabriel’s stare sharpened. “That’s not nothing.”
I pulled the phone out. The screen was awake. Bright. Waiting. No alerts, no messages—just awake like it knew something was happening. I flipped it over in my hand and shoved it face-down again, like I could hide it from the moment.
I forced myself to look back at the skull because rocks don’t lie. Bone doesn’t lie. Physics doesn’t lie.
Only—
The “eye” looked… different.
Not dramatically. Not like it had rearranged itself. Like it had shifted a few millimeters inside my perception, the socket edge I’d traced in my head felt sharper now, rounder. The shadow inside it seemed deeper.
I blinked hard.
Chloe’s voice went small. “Did it… change? It’s not alive, is it?”
“No,” Gabriel said instantly. Too fast.
“It’s shadows,” I said, but my voice didn’t believe me. “It’s just the—”
I stopped, because the teeth—
A gap I’d registered—an empty socket—looked less empty. Like there was a pale nub there now, a suggestion of tooth, the rock trying to fill in what it thought should exist.
My skin prickled.
Gabriel crouched again, closer. “It’s not changing,” he said, but he sounded like he was talking to himself as much as to us. “It can’t.”
“Take a picture,” I heard myself say.
Chloe blinked. “I did.”
“Again,” I said. “Same angle. Same distance. Right now.”
Gabriel hesitated, then pulled out his phone too, reluctantly, like he hated giving the moment a witness. He held it up—steady arms, higher viewpoint—and took a photo.
Chloe took one from where she stood, trying to lean around Gabriel.
Gabriel smiled.
I took one from where I was, half-braced on the rock.
Three devices.
Three “truths.”
We stared at our screens.
And something inside me loosened, like a bolt backing out of its slot.
The photos didn’t match.
Not enough for a normal person to notice. Enough for my brain—my stupid pattern-hungry brain—to notice immediately.
In Chloe’s photo, the socket looked rounder—more “dinosaur.” In Gabriel’s, the jaw looked shorter, the teeth spacing tighter. In mine, the socket was elongated again, but the ridge above it looked shifted by a few millimeters, as the bone line had moved.
I lifted my eyes to the boulder.
Then down to the phones.
Then back to the boulder.
My mind threw excuses at me like sandbags: lens distortion, digital sharpening, compression, and lighting.
But the worst part was the feeling that the real thing was the least reliable version.
Gabriel’s voice came out low. “Okay.”
Chloe swallowed. “Okay what.”
Gabriel held up his phone, then pointed at the boulder without looking away from it. “That,” he said, tapping the screen, “is not exactly what I’m looking at right now.”
“Same,” I whispered.
Chloe’s eyes went wide. “So what are we supposed to believe?”
I wanted to say the rock. I wanted to say my eyes. I wanted to say reality.
But Chloe had trained a different reflex into me: doubt the thing you’re sure about, because confidence is just a target. The most convincing thing is often the thing designed to convince you.
I stepped down off the ledge, boots crunching grit, and backed away like distance could give me objectivity.
“We can’t trust this,” I said, voice flat.
Gabriel’s eyes flicked to me. “The boulder?”
I shook my head slowly. “Any of it,” I said. “Not sight. Not phones. Not… obvious.”
Chloe looked from her screen to the skull and back, and for the first time, she didn’t look smug or loud. She looked small.
“If we can’t trust what’s right in front of us,” Chloe said quietly, “then whoever put it here can make it look like anything.”
Gabriel exhaled through his nose. “So we do what we can verify.”
I nodded once, grateful for something that wasn’t squishy and shifting. “We verify the tag,” I said. “JP-17. Lot 4B. Paper trail. Somebody moved a car-sized rock into a wash. That leaves receipts.”
Chloe’s voice came back sharper, like she was trying to rebuild armor. “So we’re not touching it. Believe me, I’m not getting haunted by a sea dinosaur because Methuselah wanted ‘evidence.’”
I didn’t even have the energy to argue with the nickname this time. I just looked at the graffiti—HOWEVER… SEAN FIRST—and felt the mask settle over the whole scene.
Teen stupid. Local names. Harmless.
A costume.
And it worked on me for a second, too—because part of me wanted to believe this was just kids being dumb and the world being weird.
I stared at the Mosasaur skull embedded in stone and felt the most unsettling realization of all:
This boulder wasn’t a fossil discovery.
It was an interface.
And it was already doing what it was designed to do—turn us against what we were seeing…
…and make us follow anyway.
“What a way to end your summer vacation!” I said, laughing. Tomorrow would be the first day of school. We would have let this mystery wait until the weekend if we were lucky.

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